Analysis of Own Thinking.



You're the driver of your destiny,
Passenger of none,
In control and looking forward
Of things that must be done

I'm living in my own little world.
I'm happy there, it's okay.
It's much more fun than the real one,
For the sun shines every day.

Some people say I'm stuck in this place
and I'll never go anywhere,
but in my dreams I've already been there.
I know someday I'll have to wake up,
but I feel the real world is more like a nightmare.

I know my world's not the real one.
It's only my world of make-believe.
But it's a world I often visit,
If it's only in my dreams.


Scheme XAXA XBAB XCCXC AXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 101011100 10011 00101010 111111 110011101 110111 11111011 10111001 110111011 0110110 1011101011 11111111 11101111101 11111011 110111101 110111010 1110011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 583
Words 132
Sentences 9
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5, 4
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 108
Words per stanza (avg) 28

About this poem

Lets just my thoughts and feelings alone and i just want to reach out my destiny with my own powers.

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Submitted by abhishekakamble5 on October 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Abhishek Ashok Kamble

I am 25 year old and i love writing poems. I just put my thoughts and words together and what i fell i just write it down. more…

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