Analysis of My school Environer

Pavni Vatsyayen 2007 (Manali)



The nature is beautiful, lovely and calm
Forest are full of trees
and flowers with butterflies in bees.

I can hear the sound of Whispering trees and a flowing stream.....
which send my mind into a lovely dream.

The sun is shining as bright as gold
And the woods around me are as many as 500 years old!

Everything is really beautiful and especially the sun rays......
Here, I can spend all my days.

The trees around are as tall as they're touching the sky....
And the flowers are red and pink, bended as they're shy!

This day is really calm and bright.....
And like these Little birds I'm also ready to take a high flight!


Scheme XAA BB CC DD EE FF
Poetic Form
Metre 01011001001 101111 01011001 111011100100101 1111010101 011101111 0010111110111 101101000010011 1111111 0101111111001 0010110110111 11110101 0111011101011011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 627
Words 130
Sentences 11
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 79
Words per stanza (avg) 19

About this poem

This is my first ever poem. It was written for my school surrounding.

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Written on July 11, 2007

Submitted by pavnivatsyayen on October 18, 2022

Modified on May 02, 2023

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Pavni Vatsyayen

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