Analysis of Moonlight Ranch



On this ranch there were no whinnying horses neighing
the night away on a cool desert evening.

Or a Red Angus mother mooing imploringly for her
new-born baby bull to hurry up and join the herd.

Or fiddle-footed chickens clucking spasmodically
in anticipation of their morning bucket of
whole kernel corn long past due.

Or transient ranch hands, edgy drifters signed on
for a week's pay and nothing beyond.

Not even a chuckwagon cook slinging pewter plates of beans
and pouring cups of coarse coffee from a graniteware pot.   

On this ranch, outside Carson City, Nevada, inside a
moonlit doublewide, there were only prostitutes
and the loss of my virginity.


Scheme AA XX BXX XX XX XXB
Poetic Form
Metre 1111011101 01011011010 10110101110 1110111010101 1101010100100 000101110101 1101111 11011101011 101101001 1100111010111 010111101011 111111010010010 11101010 001110100
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 671
Words 126
Sentences 7
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 3, 2, 2, 3
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 88
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

Always thought a doublewide in the middle of the desert was an interesting venue to be deflowered.

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Written on June 01, 2022

Submitted by on September 30, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Thomas Molitor

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