Analysis of Healthy Self-Hate



A fear of me boiled over a first date;
shooting stars overshadowed
the autumn in her evening green eyes.
The hate wired in me
is sufficient for us both.
Loosen the tension in your chest.
I’ve got the guilt concealed.
The stigma of what I know not
The cartel of broken dreams
cloaks agony in my heart of hysteria.
When I beheld your gaze, it was clear
I’m a game you play
between commercials breaks.
Again, I’m me.
The one nobody sees.


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 0111110011 101010 010001011 011001 1010111 10010011 110101 01011111 0011101 110001110100 11111111 10111 010101 0111 0111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 440
Words 90
Sentences 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 339
Words per stanza (avg) 82

About this poem

A man with self-hate takes inventory of his thoughts.

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Written on October 10, 2022

Submitted by driownu2 on October 10, 2022

Modified on March 15, 2023

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Andy Cooper

My name is Andy Cooper (not my real name). After serving in the military, I returned to Washington State and attended college. It was there that I fell in love with writing, especially writing short stories. I read everything by Raymond Carver I could find. After finishing college, I worked as a substitute teacher and a tutor. more…

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