Analysis of Craving

Anju Kumari 1997 (Varanasi)



Can I kick you out of my mind?
Pestering like a playboy in school.
Holding me inside the darkness of 2 am,
Can't you see! I am done at 9.
Overlooked you for a month and this is how crazy you shine.
Put it back, though I like wine!, what's this huge dine.
Painful tincture you added after, look! isn't it a crime and decline!
Oh my stupid excuse work for me not against.
Let's go back and see how 18 looked at me.
Cursing the art, wish no one's a good giggle at food bar.
Step aside, make a room and go empty in a war.


Scheme ABCDEEEFGHI
Poetic Form
Metre 11111111 10010101 1010101011 1111111 10110101111011 11111111111 101011010110101001 111001111101 111011111 10011110110111 1011010110001
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 517
Words 117
Sentences 13
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 387
Words per stanza (avg) 107

About this poem

"Craving" is a poem that defines the emotional crunch of having crazy cravings at night when you really want to look like something in your 18. A fair dispute between "can I eat?" and "I can not".

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Written on October 17, 2022

Submitted by best2anju29 on October 17, 2022

Modified on March 23, 2023

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