Analysis of And, I'm breaking

Prabin Panta 2004 (Lamjung)



Heart is beating
Mouth is shouting
Eyes are crying
Ears are listening
And,
I'm breaking

World is faking
Sun is setting
Light is fading
And,
Darkness is rising

Hope is vanishing
Life is ruining
Voices are disappearing
And,
People are dying

Devils are rising
Gods are falling
Thoughts are corrupting
And,
Distance is increasing


Scheme aaaaBa aaaBa aaaBa aaaBa
Poetic Form
Metre 1110 1110 1110 11100 0 110 1110 1110 1110 0 10110 11100 11100 101010 0 10110 10110 1110 11010 0 101010
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 340
Words 72
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 67
Words per stanza (avg) 14

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Written on October 06, 2022

Submitted by Atley0 on October 06, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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