Analysis of Ako'y kapwa mo kabataan

Jonel Sayson 3003 (Pangasinan)



Sa dakong timog silanga'y isang musmos and nasaksi,
Isang pag-asa ng hinaharap na walang kasing-hapdi,
Sa lupaing lugmok ang kahirapan at paghihirap,
Na tanging kaalaman lamang ang maaring makapagliligtas.

Sa kaniyang paglaki'y anong saya ang nadama,
Tila isang regalo na sa may kapal nagmula,
Pagmamahal ng ina'y kaniyang natamasa,
Sa hirap at saya'y siya'y may kasama.

Paglipas ng taon sa kaniyang paglaki,
Tila ang hangin lumihis ng hampis,
Katangian niya'y nagbago tila,
Ang dapat ay mabuti'y hindi nagawa.

Aking mga kapwa kabataan ng inang bayan,
Tayo'y gumising na sa ating katotohanan,
Kailangan nating umayon sa bugso ng bayan,
Sakanya'y maging bayani at magakapagbigay karalangan.

Di pa huli ang lahat aking kaibigan,
Pagbabago'y kahit kaila'y sayo'y maghihintay,
Andito ako para ika'y tulungan at samahan,
Ako'y kapwa mo kabataan na pag-asa ng bayan.


Scheme ABXA CDAC XADX EEEE EBEE
Poetic Form Quatrain  (40%)
Metre 11111101 1110111111 1111111 1111111 1111111 11111111 1110111 1111111 111111 111111 1111 1111101 1111111 111111 1111111 111111 1111111 11111 11101111 1111111011
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 864
Words 154
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 139
Words per stanza (avg) 26

About this poem

This poem is in Filipino language, this is dedicated to those Filipino youth who are misaligned with thier life.

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Written on October 31, 2022

Submitted by j.kustaclee123 on October 31, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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