Analysis of 7821



Sail the skies of soft clouds to rest my heavy head,
Become lighter than air to soar my thoughts,
Blow them away to make room for dreams,
Create space for divine signs of life to be lived,
Let the chance of pure moments enter,
Allow positive emotions affect my pulse,
Maintain control of my limbs and make them limp,
Bring my pulse to a slow steady rhythm,
Allow now ignorance or harm intrude my temple,
Rest my eyes,
Recover my muscles,
Prepare this temple for a new day,
Rest,
My heavy head...


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLMA
Poetic Form
Metre 101111111101 0110111111 110111111 011101111111 101111010 011000100111 01011110111 1111011010 0111001101110 111 010110 011101011 1 1101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 504
Words 105
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 388
Words per stanza (avg) 92

About this poem

I wrote this poem in part of a series, every night before I go to bed I wanted to write words to calm me and rest my body before I slept, this is one of many.

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Written on August 07, 2021

Submitted by kovadism88 on October 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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I grew up in a small town in Arkansas called Helena-West Helena. Graduated in 2006 joined the navy in 2008. Now I reside in Texas and I'm still in the Navy 14yrs in. more…

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