Analysis of Melt



Steel at my back
a welcome intrusion,
confirming my own suspicions, permitting my desires
—sharpening them, even.
Fuel to the flames.

Silken petals drip
sweet, honeyed molasses dew
nocturnal flower blossoming
—firelighting below Diana’s gaze.
Spindle to depression, kindle and spark,
we set the world ablaze.

Caught like a butterfly in the spider’s web,
trapped, held mindlessly, mercilessly betwixt
pleasure and pain —saccharine release promised only
from the combining of silk and steel, catching fire
and melting into one.


Scheme XAXXX XXXBXB XXXXA
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 010010 010110100101010 100110 10101 10101 110101 01010100 10111 1010101001 110101 1101000101 11100100001 100110011010 1001011011010 010011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 537
Words 88
Sentences 5
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 6, 5
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 142
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Written on 2020

Submitted by lifeasalyric on November 06, 2022

Modified on March 08, 2023

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