Analysis of You're my nightmare

Cristina 1985 (Lake havasu city)



Thought ud be my everything
You said you'd love me for me
In one day everything changes
U played me how could I
Be so so blind
Never saw it coming
You and your friends bullied me
You could have made things right
But you chose to not
You are my nightmare
Sometimes I see your face
It's haunting me
Sometimes I feel we were meant to be
But you had to let me go
You gave up on us
You are My nightmare
You've hurt others like me
How can you walk around
With your head up high and smile and laugh
About all that you've done to me and others
You've hurt us for fun
You are my nightmare
I gave myself all to you
Loved you like no other
I was honest kind and true
But you chose to hurt me so
You are my nightmare
Forevermore


Scheme abcdeabfgHibbjkHblmnoHpqpjHh
Poetic Form
Metre 111110 1111111 0111010 111111 1111 101110 1011101 111111 11111 1111 011111 1101 011110111 1111111 11111 1111 111011 111101 111110101 01111111010 11111 1111 111111 111110 1110101 1111111 1111 1
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 720
Words 154
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 28
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 562
Words per stanza (avg) 150

About this poem

Myself and my ex

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Written on October 31, 2022

Submitted by Cdollfce on November 01, 2022

Modified on April 22, 2023

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