Analysis of The deceased Deuces

Sam madeyin 1991 (Ogun States)



Love is my bodily infirmities or am I just about here sentimental
merged in the airline occidental
Of relationship good I wasn't counter offer
 it sower pounds for not my mental health
Yet I wasn't born sure from those fetfully felt,
undrowned through the bowel of mercy crowned at the doors of judgement
Saddened seems and wearied under the furrowed by the cloutless firmament

Need to paused a while to hear the echoes echeloned my thoughts on the couch prepared nights
The Deuces fight still, I and darkest fear into whites anticipation
Mind as if rovering along the dark sly sky wished to be mixed and falls
Asking if we died already
As we boarding up the auto aerospace
I knew the Devils advocates my heart off the sight am wisely heady
Sucked up I fell the sore glaze

This worries ain't for my immatured me thinks my mind lightly uncurried for it
Gripping by the fear wishes I never knew
Unemblazoned me a real dress azured blues
I know my death I weighed my words of no count
but no affection upon world I left.


Scheme AAXXBXB XXXCXCX XXXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11110001001111011010 1001010 101011101010 1101111101 1110111111 110101101101110 101010100101011 1110111010111101011 0111101010110010 1111010111111101 10111010 1110101010 110101001110111010 1111011 1101111111110111 10101101101 1101111 11111111111 1101001111
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,019
Words 189
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 7, 7, 5
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 43
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 275
Words per stanza (avg) 62
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Written on October 09, 2022

Submitted by LiteralErudite on October 08, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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