Analysis of When she said
When she said,
She didn’t sleep yesterday
They nagged;
“You must stop using your phone”
Little did they know,
Her insecurities kept her awake.
When she said,
She felt heavy inside like she is drowning
They mocked;
“It might be a heart attack”
Little did they know,
Her thoughts are becoming suicidal.
When she said,
She doesn’t feel any emotions
They laughed;
“Stop being a drama queen”
Little did they know,
Her soul has frozen itself.
When she said,
She felt lonely even with her closest people
They judged;
“You are an introvert”
Little did they know,
Her trust issues lock her up.
And when she said,
She might die of sadness
They ignored;
“--------------------------------------"
Little did they know,
Sadness took her life away.
Scheme | AbcdEfAghiEjAklmEnAjopEqars Eb |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (37%) Etheree (33%) |
Metre | 111 11110 11 1111011 10111 001001001 111 11100111110 11 1110101 10111 011010010 111 11110010 11 1100101 10111 0111001 111 111010101010 11 11110 10111 0110101 0111 111110 101 1 10111 1010101 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 756 |
Words | 143 |
Sentences | 5 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 30 |
Lines Amount | 30 |
Letters per line (avg) | 18 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 540 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 124 |
About this poem
The poem is about the unheard cries and unseen sadness of depressed people went unnoticed until its too late.
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Written on September 13, 2022
Submitted by lachumol147 on September 13, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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