Analysis of When she said



When she said,
She didn’t sleep yesterday
They nagged;
“You must stop using your phone”
Little did they know,
Her insecurities kept her awake.
When she said,
She felt heavy inside like she is drowning
They mocked;
“It might be a heart attack”
Little did they know,
Her thoughts are becoming suicidal.
When she said,
She doesn’t feel any emotions
They laughed;
“Stop being a drama queen”
Little did they know,
Her soul has frozen itself.
When she said,
She felt lonely even with her closest people
They judged;
“You are an introvert”
Little did they know,
Her trust issues lock her up.
And when she said,
She might die of sadness
They ignored;
“--------------------------------------"
Little did they know,
Sadness took her life away.


Scheme AbcdEfAghiEjAklmEnAjopEqars Eb
Poetic Form Tetractys  (37%)
Etheree  (33%)
Metre 111 11110 11 1111011 10111 001001001 111 11100111110 11 1110101 10111 011010010 111 11110010 11 1100101 10111 0111001 111 111010101010 11 11110 10111 0110101 0111 111110 101 1 10111 1010101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 756
Words 143
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 30
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 540
Words per stanza (avg) 124

About this poem

The poem is about the unheard cries and unseen sadness of depressed people went unnoticed until its too late.

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Written on September 13, 2022

Submitted by lachumol147 on September 13, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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