Analysis of Whatever Happened to the Outhouse?

Paul D. Lacey 1947 (Zanesville, Ohio)

Ode


WHATEVER HAPPENED TO THE OUTHOUSE?

Whatever happened to the Outhouse,
With the seat all rough and cold!
The one that had the roughly hewed door,
With the latch that would never hold!

And there replacing the Charmin,
Was yesterday’s Daily News.
To be utilized to its fullest
And not to be abused!

I often long for those days gone by,
When I have the Monday blues.
Even if it did require
Using yesterday’s Daily News!!!!!


Scheme A Abxb xcxx xcxc
Poetic Form
Metre 1010101 1010101 1011101 011101011 10111101 0101001 110101 11101110 011101 110111111 1110101 1011110 1010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 429
Words 90
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 82
Words per stanza (avg) 19

About this poem

Inspired by day dreaming about old times and old challenges.

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Written on June 02, 2002

Submitted by PoePaul on September 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Paul D. Lacey

Grew up in Ohio. Lived in Virginia, Saudi Arabia and now Texas. Worked in Washington, D.C. Have 6 lovely grandchildren and twin great granddaughters. Reinvented student! more…

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