Analysis of Torment in the heart



TORMENT IN THE HEART
Sheep's are delicate and simple to control
Not at all like lions are hard and challenging to control
Not on the grounds that they aren't delicate as well
But since they need trust
there face and skin monstrosities different creatures from coming close
Lions show trust just to the group of the lions
show contempt towards others living with them
Some of the time the sheep's transforms into lions
As a result of the treatment given to them
They were not brought into the world with it, but rather attempting to foster it
Not on the grounds that they love to do as such,
But since they are being mistreated.
Is the sheep attempting to vindicate his agonies?
Or on the other hand attempting to resemble the lions?
Is the sheep currently wearing a lion skin?
Allow each sheep to resemble a lion
Avenging its aggravation from torment.
Allow no lion to resemble a sheep
Having a powerless person towards torment
Since the sheep is powerless in the heart
And powerless on the fabric


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Poetic Form
Metre 1001 11100010101 111110110100101 1101111010011 11111 11011100101101 101111011010 10101101011 110101010110 100110101011 10110101111100101101 11011111111 111110010 10101011001100 1101010101010010 101100100101 01111010010 010101011 01110101001 10010010011 1011100001 01001010
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 997
Words 184
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 22
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 810
Words per stanza (avg) 178

About this poem

This poem state how human beings should be patient and also encourage people not to hurt one another. In life some people are very patient so people shouldn't use that advantage to hurt other people feelings. However, the patient people get to react in a hurtful way when their patient are been tested wrongly.

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Written on September 09, 2022

Submitted by tahirrabiumusa66 on September 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Tahir Rabiu Musa

Tahir Rabiu Musa is a writer and a student of mass communication. He writes poems, feature stories, and news stories. As an emerging journalist, he loves to get involved in in-depth stories and publications.  more…

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