Analysis of That her eyes



Poem Title: "THAT HER VOICE"
Author: Amoko Joseph

Sing for me just sing
In your voice alone lies my music
I feel the beats with my heart beat
Sing for me just sing.

That voice that makes me melt
A melody that lights the fire inside my heart
A gift of music that keeps my dreams to prime,
An inspiration to which my soul always knelt
The love book that's taking nothing but my art
With every beat, making my heart sublime.

Sing for me just sing
In your voice alone lies my music.

That voice that leads my troubles into the wind
A music notation that comforts my heart from the past
Breathing through your love..............words unsaid
A symphony that holds my heart to yours and it's taste,
The tune that clasps into one our hearts, to forever be intertwined
In it's vibrations, I'm a guest seeking to rest a weary feet.

Sing for me just sing
In your voice alone lies my music.

And when I lie here, the thoughts of you makes me melt
I feel peace that ignites the tones of your voice in my heart
Every thought of it keeps and takes my soul to prime
To your love I'll always kneel like in the days that I knelt
For I know your love is full of the voice that gave me this art
Being only with you will make our hearts to always sublime.

Sing for me just sing
In your voice alone lies my music.


Scheme xx ABcA defdef AB gxxxgc AB defdef AB
Poetic Form
Metre 1010101 10110 11111 011011110 11011111 11111 111111 0100110100111 01110111111 1010111111 01111010111 11001101101 11111 011011110 11111100101 01001011011101 1011101 0100111111011 011101110110101001 0101010110110101 11111 011011110 011110111111 11110101111011 1001111011111 1111111001111 111111110111111 101011111011101 11111 011011110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,297
Words 269
Sentences 8
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 6, 2, 6, 2, 6, 2
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 125
Words per stanza (avg) 32

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Dedicated to someone special

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Written on September 10, 2022

Submitted by amokoj72 on September 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Amoko Joseph

A 16 year student in Pagirinya Refugee Settlement. South Sudanese by nationality more…

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