Analysis of Sea Of Emotions

Ranbir 2003 (Odisha)



Reference:
the black beauty Ref. meaning:
   “The feelings influence me:
   I hope you will grow up gentle
   and good,
   and never learn bad ways;
   do your work with a good will.“
.
.
Poem:
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When The intensity gets thicker
I keep thinking about u
Chaotic sense by the liquor
boozing all of it without u
drifting me away
In the sea of emotions, you teach me.
.
.
unquestionable aroma
brings you back to me,
as I remain experiencing
The beautiful moments of life,
The intensity of it:
The black beauty,
making me
addicted to life,
drifting me away
In the sea of emotions, you teach me.
.
.
Is it me?Or is it Us?,
The same feeling mutual
Enriches us,
And the others unusual
in heart of hearts killing us,
drifting me away
In the sea of emotions, you teach me.
.
.
When blood tingles with
less passion,
You end up being
the only diversion,
All of it, all I know,
the silence grows:
when you said
I have to go,
drifting me away
In the sea of emotions, you teach me.
.
.
~Ranbir


Scheme abcdefg h ijijKC lcbmnccmKC ododoKC pqbqrstrKC i
Poetic Form
Metre 100 0110110 0101001 11111110 01 010111 1111011 1 1 10 1 100100110 1110011 01011010 10111011 10101 0011010111 1 1 01000010 11111 110101000 01001011 0010011 0110 101 01011 10101 0011010111 1 1 111111 0110100 0101 0010010 0111101 10101 0011010111 1 1 1111 110 11110 010010 111111 0101 111 1111 10101 0011010111 1 1 1
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 989
Words 219
Sentences 20
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 53
Lines Amount 53
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 729
Words per stanza (avg) 188

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How I intensely felt through my feelings

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Written on September 11, 2022

Submitted by ranbirdas176 on September 11, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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