Analysis of Real Me!



The real me awakes, when a child is born
The real me rises, when a child is risen,
The real me plays, when a child is being played with,
The real me lives, when a child is shrieked,
The real me reads, when a child is read,
The real me loves, when a child is loved,
The real me listens, when a child is being spoken to,
The real me calms down, when a child is slept,
The real me enjoys, when a child is enjoyed
The real me is sad, when a child grows,
The real me is anxious, when a child becomes quiet,
The real me is confused, when a child lies,
The real me is stressed, when a child hides,
The real me is broken, when a child crys,
The real me is angry, when a child fights,
The real me is forgotten, when a child gets lost,
The real me is lost, when a man comes,
The real me hides, when a man shouts,
The real me runs, when a man awakes,
The real me cries, when a man laughs,
The real me!
One day ,I reached in my heart but there was no noise of memories,
And now….
The real me is dying, when a child had dead!


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Poetic Form
Metre 011110111 01110101110 011110111011 011110111 011110111 011110111 01110101110101 0111110111 01101101101 011111011 0111101010110 0111011011 011111011 0111101011 0111101011 011101010111 011111011 01111011 01111011 01111011 011 1111011111111100 01 01111010111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,024
Words 238
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 755
Words per stanza (avg) 213

About this poem

My poem 'Real me!' talks about the changes and effects of adulthood. It mainly represent the conflict and confusion between inner child and outer world (man).

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Written on September 11, 2022

Submitted by vishalgola2408 on September 11, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Vishal gola

My name is Vishal gola. I'm from New Delhi, India. My age is 19 years and currently I'm pursuing English honours from Delhi University. I belong to middle class family thats why I usually try to represent the mentality and psychological perspective of middle class society. Also in my poems I talk about spirituality, philosophy and self love. I'm an optimistic person who always try to live his life moments with spiritual and holy guidance. more…

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