Analysis of Pain

Fibber 2000 (earth)



I wear death like a perfume
I will always be presence for you
I'm everywhere, and you cannot distance yourself from me
Don't attempt to flee; I'll always be right behind you
I'll arrive before anyone expects me to
I'll fill you with void and lift you on my shoulders
I'll walk you a little distance and drop you off
You will be dropped off to the charred forest fire
No, you wont burn, i shall not let you
Your voice will be heard throughout the world like a locomotive spewing smoke
Then i shall throw you into the river of grief
You wont drown
But you sure will suffocate.
                                             -pain


Scheme ABCBBDEFBGHIJK
Poetic Form
Metre 1111001 11111011 1100110100111 101111111011 10101100111 111110111110 111010100111 111111011010 111111111 11111010110010101 111110101011 111 111110 1
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 626
Words 112
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 458
Words per stanza (avg) 111

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Pain, Pain, Pain....

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Submitted by Fibber_ on September 02, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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