Analysis of Our Time To Mourn



Queuing, shuffling, filing by
The Nation’s people-in-waiting
Enter Ole Westminster Hall
Under rafters, peacefully laying
Our Queen!
Our Queen.

Muffled, tired feet have carried for miles
Solemn faces, their weary smiles
In unity, with politicians and dignitaries
Let the Nation’s mourning begin
Come in!
Come in.

Stay quiet now little children
Wiser fingertips, hush those lips
Thread carefully into history
Lost Souls have fought for this
Give thanks!
Give thanks.

Uniform heads bowed in silent duty
Our Sovereign, lies in-state
Resting above Christ’s purple shroud
Her Standard, neatly draped
We mourn!
We mourn.

A chance to stop, curtesy, to bow our heads
Hands placed together in prayer
A capped salute, a blown kiss, a tear
For our beloved Queen Elizabeth lays here
In peace!
In peace.


Scheme xaxaBB ccxdDD xxexFF exxxGG xhhxII
Poetic Form Tetractys  (33%)
Etheree  (27%)
Metre 1010101 01010010 101101 101010010 101 101 1010111011 10101101 010010100100 10101001 10 10 11011010 1010111 110001100 111111 11 11 101101010 1010101 10011101 010101 11 11 0111111101 1101001 010101101 110011010011 01 01
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 802
Words 141
Sentences 10
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 127
Words per stanza (avg) 25

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For the Queen lying in-state.

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Written on September 19, 2022

Submitted by Ellieesheehan on September 19, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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