Analysis of My love.

Ibhawoh Angela 2005 (Niger state)

Ode


When my eyes flutter close,
Love is what makes me see her afterimage in my sleep.
For the life treasures I safe-keep in her soul,
No greater tempest shall from my arm refuse keep.

The dark skin of my love glistens:
A night sky filled with stars.
Even so, my ear, with great attention listens,
To the words from my love that aid to soothe my scars.

If looks be feelings, mine are pure and delightful; like her smile.
If feelings be human, then my love is her.
May the beauty of love never fade in ours awhile.
A lovely illusion, set in my sight forever.

Love is beautiful, and so is my love.
Till eternity, words to show our love: my love, shall never be enough.


Scheme ABXB ACXC DEDE XX
Poetic Form
Metre 111101 1111110100011 10110111001 110101111011 0111111 011111 101111101010 101111111111 111101110010101 11011011110 10101110101001 0100101011010 1110001111 1010011110111110101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 676
Words 146
Sentences 10
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 128
Words per stanza (avg) 32

About this poem

A poem that describes how the persona finds the beauty and delight of love, in the features of his lover. Adoring her and ascribing her to the feelings he harbours for her and it's depth.

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Written on September 08, 2022

Submitted by ibhawohangela on September 19, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ibhawoh Angela

I am a sixteen year old poet and upcoming writer with the hope of being recognized for something I love, which is my poetry. more…

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