Analysis of My letter



This is my letter
Read and smile
Dear Miss
I’m writing you a letter
This is to our unborn child
Tell them dad loves them all
Though it later came from another
The blessed deposit of his semens
Your choice was the best
May God bless my scanty foot leap tread on your loamy soil

Please take care of all my kids and my unborn seed
You can’t understand how much love I have for you,till we trade places
I feel guilty of being anxious
Seem so complicated to escape fate
Can I believe in my own fate?
Will we raise our child together?
Or I will watch in behind the mirror
To see another perform
Mirroring the kind of life I wished for on earth with my woman

I think about you every day
I have so much to say
I think we will have these kids
I think but it though a thought

Dear miss
When you have our child
Incase I don’t make it
But you made it with another
Kiss them all for me
Tell them all my clownish act
Tell them am never a hero
Tell them the greatest tale I have told you
That I love you
Tell them
Tell them dad loves them all  
Tell them to work hard
Tell them run wild but to be smart
To watch out for the fake friends and for those snakes
And to trust nobody

Dear miss,
just know
I love you
And
I got nothing
but love for you

Never forget me
Even if you do...,
Never make our child forget whom genuinely loved you
I love you
And
I got nothing but love for you


Scheme axBacDabxx xxxeeaaxx ffxx BcxagxhiixDxxxg BhIJxi giiIJi
Poetic Form Tetractys  (38%)
Etheree  (26%)
Metre 11110 101 11 1101010 11110111 111111 111011010 01010111 11101 11111011111101 111111101111 110111111111110 111011010 111001011 11010111 111101010 1111001010 1101001 1000111111111110 110111001 111111 1111111 1111101 11 111101 011111 11111010 11111 111111 11110010 1101011111 1111 11 111111 11111 11111111 11110110111 0111 11 11 111 0 1110 1111 10011 10111 101101011100011 111 0 11101111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,422
Words 330
Sentences 4
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 10, 9, 4, 15, 6, 6
Lines Amount 50
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 178
Words per stanza (avg) 47

About this poem

It talks about my girlfriend having her kids with another man

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Written on September 02, 2022

Submitted by Sunslove05 on September 02, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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