Analysis of light

nhlamulo 2005 (saselamani)



light is the sherperd of shaddow
light,when its dark, you always in control of
driving shaddow
light, we put our trust upon you
without you its hard to be successful

a father who`s responsible is a light
a mother who`s responsible is a light
is there any chance for an ophane to get
bright future, how can a future be bright
without light

its not easy like how we meditate
its like a solder carrying a bag of sand
running marathon
life is unfair how could it break someones
future light without their concern


Scheme AXAXX AAAAA AAXXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Metre 110111 111110011 101 111101011 0111111010 01010100101 01010100101 1110111111 1101101011 011 111011110 110101000111 1010 110111111 10101101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 517
Words 99
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 137
Words per stanza (avg) 31

About this poem

i wrote it in order to ends custom judgement that people usually do to ophans before understanding very well that they would have been something better in life if they had counselors such as parents

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Written on September 08, 2022

Submitted by takcomrade on September 08, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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nhlamulo

i grew up in a rural place, i spend much of my time meditating about the struggle and the gudgements people usually do when they see poor ophans i enjoy writting poems althrough im still young , but my talent is never lil..... more…

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