Analysis of Last work
Waking up all gone.
Top of my gut roaring African lion facing the sky,"all gone, no more light, dawn, stroll facing horizon". There was empty body of a queen lies on concrete floor filled with Sandy soil. All come from sand back to sand. So they said.
Your last walk.
Young and confused, All pack had left me. Young in the middle of this road, many roads to follow, much to face. This is the difference between queen and a prince; How you help me face all the obstacle, You covered so much I wasn't ready to face, It was so transparent with you around, now young king sometimes I couldn't with you no more mummy.
Daily tears in the backyard.
All these responsibilities flowers drying, The little water I have is for drinking. No path is clear mummy, You thank all the responsibilities, Now a lion instead of cub. Is it true you are gone?.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 10111 1111101001010011111111001011101010111011111011111111111 111 100111111100101111011101111101000110011111110100110111101011111010110111101110111110 101001 110010010100101011111011111011100010010100111111111 |
Characters | 891 |
Words | 162 |
Sentences | 13 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 6 |
Lines Amount | 6 |
Letters per line (avg) | 109 |
Words per line (avg) | 26 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 651 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 156 |
About this poem
This is a boy had lost his precious mother. True story.learn from it.
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Written on September 14, 2022
Submitted by dikensodu on September 14, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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