Analysis of If its upto there.



If it's up to there,
I am ready, my dear.

I offered roses
You took none,
I asked your hands
You gave me none,

If it's death
Which gonna be cause of our union
If it's up to there,
I am ready my dear..

If it's death
When you gonna hold my hand,
I am ready my dear
If it's just up to there!

Seeing you in clouds
Missing you in crowds,
Fed up with all these
Be with me forever please...

Holding your hands
Kissing your cheeks,
Dating on ocean breeze
Some dreams are here,

If it's up to there
I am ready, my dear

Death is a fear
I slayed my fear,
If it's just up to there
I am ready, my dear....


Scheme AB xcdc EcAB ExBA ffgg dxgx AB bbAB
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 111011 11010 111 1111 1111 111 1101111010 11111 111011 111 1110111 111011 111111 10101 10101 11111 1110101 1011 1011 101101 1111 11111 111011 1101 1111 111111 111011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 597
Words 145
Sentences 5
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2, 4
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 55
Words per stanza (avg) 16

About this poem

This is a poem which is written by a girl in pains of sepration by her beloved

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Written on September 02, 2022

Submitted by nisaacharya6 on September 05, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Nisha Acharya

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