Analysis of Final Goodbye



Final goodbye
Final goodbye is it really said and done
Or it’s said and not done
I wish I never said it.
Pain and gain I have
lost to gain and won to pain
Sleepless night filled with tears
I need to hold you
I’m tired of imaginations.

Thrown my pride I did beg you to come back
But just like the stars are far from earth
you far from me
I would travel a thousand miles just to see you
But I would return with more gift of pains
Moving on quickly i wonder how you do it.

You gone, my heart is broken,
no cares the world moves on
 I’m on a standby, everyone moves so fast
Calm me down, I’m drowning in my own disaster.  I hope I never love again
But if I do
I hope it’s last forever
                                           Ethan Patrick


Scheme XAABXXXCX XXXCXB AXXXCXX
Poetic Form
Metre 101 1011110101 111011 1111011 10111 1110111 101111 11111 11010010 1111111111 111011111 1111 111001011111 1110111111 101101101111 1111110 110111 1101110111 11111001101011110101 1111 1111010 1010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 762
Words 162
Sentences 5
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 9, 6, 7
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 178
Words per stanza (avg) 49

About this poem

Have you ever loved someone so deep that letting go is hard? This poem was about the pains of letting go, the thru story behind goodbye. U can’t easily forget those who u love.

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Written on September 20, 2022

Submitted by ngwodopatrick on September 21, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ethan Patrick

I started writing at the age of 16. I was heart broken and I became emotional, no one to talk to so I penned down my taught and my feelings in my papers to keep me from hurting too much. more…

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