Analysis of FATHER

Shagun 2008 (Meerut)



MERI KALAM BHI NA LIKH  SAKI UNKI KURBANIYON KO,
  M KY HI BYAN KYU UNKE EHSANO KO
DBAKR APNI HR JARURAT HRPL MERI ZID KO PURA KIYA
  MANO JAISE MERI HI SAANSO MEIN PAPA NE APNI ZINDAGI KO KAID KIYA
  MERI EK MUSKURAHAT JITNE KE KIYE WO APNI JAVANI KE JANE KITNE BARAS HAAR GYE,
  KI MERI EK FARMAISH PURI KRNE K LIYE NA JANE KITNE DIN WO OVERTYM KRTE HUE GUZAR GYE,
  FIR BHI EK LAFZ NA KHA AONE PAKSH MEIN KABHI
 BDE BOLE BHALE HAI MERE BABUJI
JO MUJHE BHIGADNE KA ILZAAM ZINDAGI BHAR AONE KANDHO PR DHOTHE RHE
  BYAN KR SKU PITA KO ITNI AAUKAT NHI MERI
 KI WO KALAM TO RAB KE PASS BHI NHI JO LIKH SKE EK PITA KI DI KURBANI...

WRITER ✍️: SHAGUN__THESHAYAR


Scheme AABBBBCXCDX D
Poetic Form
Metre 1111110111 11111111 11111111101 101111110111111 111111111111111 1111101111111111111 1111111111 111111 111111111111 1111011111 111111111111110111 101
Characters 668
Words 137
Sentences 2
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 11, 1
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 42
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 252
Words per stanza (avg) 66

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Pita ka Pyar..

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Written on September 16, 2022

Submitted by tomarkusum75 on September 16, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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