Analysis of Faithful desires with slient love

Taabeer khan 2000 (Lahore)



There were some enchanting memories associated with you

My heart was puerile and eyes were thristy or your sight

Leaving the worries of society,

The long nights of waiting at your doorstep were amalgamated with tears and melancholy

Your etiquette, style sense, and flawless abrupt decency keenly captured my attention

The aromatic admirable fragrance of your scent

Lusted in my soul and seeps into my body like a panacea

Remember the first letter I wrote you,

It was affix  with flowers and colorful tiny Pearls

My silent love for you will never disappear

It is its own special valley in my heart

My dreams and fantasies engulfed with your mesmerizing beauty

I wanted to follow your lead but fate couldn't allow me to stay with much longer

Last but not least,

It is a humble request if you see me dying,

Kindly hold my hand and stay with me till my last breathe ends

As you are song of my heart and peace for my soul


Scheme A X B B X X X A X X X B X X X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 101010100010011 111010101111 1001010100 01111011100100110100 1100110100110010101010 0010100010111 10011010111010010 0100110111 11101100100101 11011111001 11111010011 110100011110010 110110111110011111110 1111 1101001111110 10111011111111 111111101111
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 932
Words 186
Sentences 1
Stanzas 17
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 44
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 44
Words per stanza (avg) 10

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Love, endless feelings

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Written on October 01, 2022

Submitted by taabeerkhalidkhan on September 30, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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