Analysis of By yourself



In this lonely dessert i walk by myself,
Trying so hard and screaming for help.
Wandering cluelessly hoping to see someone
Popping my eyes out still can see no one.

Wondering where they all are now when I'm unwell,
I crossed several such desserts when they needed help.
Realising them and their vit,
Tired of endless struggle i loose hope and sit.

The tired thirsty man hopes for no good
Just a bottle of water and a cup,
He lifts his head to lighten up his mood.
He sees the bright stars gazing at him,
Endlessly praising, and cheering for him.

Without them the journey would have been dark,
But they continue burning to show him the right path.
It's been hours and now it's time for sun to rise,
It's not night anymore realises the man
As the stars tends to hide.

realises he's still thirsty,
But now he doesn't expect anyone to give him bottle of water and cup.
He smile,Stands slowly and mummers
" It's me who's gonna lift me up
It's me who's gonna lift me up".


Scheme xabb xacc cdcee xxfxc cdfDD
Poetic Form
Metre 0110011111 101101011 100110111 1011111111 10011111111 111010111101 11011 101101011101 0101011111 1010110001 1111110111 110111011 1001001011 0110101111 1101010111011 111001111111 11101101 101111 11110 1111001101111011001 111001 11110111 11110111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,036
Words 213
Sentences 11
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 151
Words per stanza (avg) 36

About this poem

This poem shows the reality of life in which a normal person faces many betrayals many ups and downs in life and thinks of giving up but the stars guide him and lifts him and after few hours as he was motivated, he notices even stars are temporary like people and its he who is going to lift and help himself in life no other person will do it.

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Written on September 02, 2022

Submitted by shubham.enunciate on September 03, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Shubham kukreja

I am shubham kukreja, age 19 High school student studying bmm course From india more…

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