Analysis of Aborted dreams
I was a fetus just as you were,
Patiently waiting for my birth,
Eager to contribute my dime to help the world,
Alas! how wrong I was,
My mother was just thirteen,
And my father uncertain,
For I was a product of rape.
Though I was mad at my family,
Who concluded that I should be flushed out,
But I realized that my mom was young,
I must not interfere with her future,
I must leave to erase the memory of my conception,
I cried realizing my dreams are getting flushed as well,
But what else can I do?
I wish I would be given a chance,
To feel the love of a mother,
To be cherished by my family,
To put a smile on mom's sad face,
To help fight for mom's generation from abuse,
But I was abused even in the womb,
Denied life before I had it.
But! Won't anyone think of my own invest?
Won't anyone fight for me?
Won't anyone stand up
And ensure that history does not? repeat itself?
Won't anyone stand
To protect the innocent future?
And protect mom's generation?
Arise oh Africa!
And give your children hopes of the future,
Arise ohh Africa!!
And give them life without torture
Arise oh Africa!!!
And ensure that every fetus have their dreams of seeing the world come true.
Arise oh Africa!!!!
And protect the African future!
Scheme | axxxxbx cxxabxd xacxxxx xcxxxab EaeaEdEa |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 110101110 10010111 101010111101 011111 1101111 0110010 11101011 111111100 1010111111 111011111 111011010 111101010011010 1110011110111 111111 111111001 11011010 111011100 11011111 11111010101 1110110001 01101111 1110111101 110111 11011 0011100110101 1101 101010010 0011010 011100 0111011010 011100 01110110 011100 0011100101111100111 011100 001010010 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,230 |
Words | 269 |
Sentences | 17 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 7, 7, 7, 7, 8 |
Lines Amount | 36 |
Letters per line (avg) | 26 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 188 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 46 |
About this poem
It's about child abuse and murder of innocent foetus It calls on all Africans to fight against, rape, abortion and all forms of child abuse for a better future.
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Written on June 25, 2022
Submitted by daviddelove27 on September 05, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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