Analysis of Up and down



Back and forth I climb the mountain
Up and down I go just like a fountain
I sweat in toil
I grind and moil
Back and forth I ascend the mountain


Scheme AABBA
Poetic Form Limerick 
Metre 10111010 1011111010 1101 1101 101101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 143
Words 31
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 113
Words per stanza (avg) 31

About this poem

This poem is about doing the same thing over and over again without getting bored or giving up.

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Submitted by TeacherKevrin on September 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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