Analysis of Fire full of diamonds
A soul was born into the new light.
They looked around and saw billions and billions of others.
They were all walking through the many doors of life.
She knew which door was her door because God stood beside it and because she was the last soul that there would ever be.
She said it is done Mother River and the new light covered the plane behind her.
She looked down at her tiny new hands, body and feet.
All the other souls had left through the doors and they had been locked behind them.
She looked back for Mother River but she had left to become the other side of forever.
She contemplated on her knees why she did not go with her this final time.
God put his hand on his newest soul and said I will be your river of life and will sustain your water of light and it will flow evermore between your heart and mine.
Eons went by and finally mother reached out to her unlocking the door to her soul.
She said Dearest soul all have returned and you have lived forever and it is time to be of Mother River once more.
But, she said, Mother you left me and I hold eternity in my hands, how can I let go of Gods.
God said I cannot return without you, and I promised not to let you go.
Scheme | ABCDEFGEHIJKLM |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 011101011 11010110010110 101101010111 1111101011101100111011111101 11111101000111001010 1111010111001 101011110101111011 11111010111110101011010 110010111111101101 1111111010111111011010111011011110011101 1011010010111001001101 11101110101110100111111101011 1111011101101000111111111 1111001011011011111 |
Characters | 1,182 |
Words | 249 |
Sentences | 14 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 14 |
Lines Amount | 14 |
Letters per line (avg) | 66 |
Words per line (avg) | 17 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 927 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 236 |
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Written on September 22, 2022
Submitted by HeatherLydiaThornhill on September 22, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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