Analysis of Eternal promises



My soul pledged an eternity on a simple sheet of card
(It had a heart of pure true love with a statue I made of our souls)
Because I loved you from the start
And now the Gods say to let you go
You've body gone so long (oh)
They say you found another now, one you've loved for long
You've dropped your pledge to me now in a gutter far away
A place I stopped passing by to watch your love so hopefully
Now I have loved more lovers, found and lost soul mates again
But I know if I left your pledge my first love, I will never be the same.


Scheme ABCDDEFGHI
Poetic Form Etheree  (20%)
Metre 111101001010111 11011111101111101 01111101 010111111 1101111 1111010111111 11111110010101 011110111111100 11111101011101 111111111111110101
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 535
Words 113
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 41
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 412
Words per stanza (avg) 113
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Written on September 16, 2022

Submitted by HeatherLydiaThornhill on September 16, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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