Analysis of Sorry God



God
When I reach the depths of my sorrow.
Can you forgive me all I have wronged.
God
When my eyes are red with tears.
Can you release me from all of my hatred.
God
When the darkness falls into a hole.
Can you love me then. Forgive me God. Love me then.
God
When I recall who I have been.
Can you forget all I have done terribly wrong. Forgive me
God
When my soul cries in realisation of the pain its caused you.
Can you believe in me once more.


Scheme AbcAdeAfgAhiAjk
Poetic Form Tetractys  (33%)
Metre 1 111011110 110111111 1 1111111 11011111110 1 101010101 111110111111 1 1111111 110111111001011 1 111101101111 11010111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 444
Words 100
Sentences 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 341
Words per stanza (avg) 92
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Written on September 09, 2022

Submitted by HeatherLydiaThornhill on September 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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