Analysis of Within The Green



The rocks call me into the green,

There, I can hear the waterfalls laugh,

And I can feel every grain of dust dance,

To the maddening rhythm of the wind,

The forests whisper and giggle at the sky,

Their banana leaves welcoming the petrichor,

As the rain kisses each bud,

With the emollient love of broken clouds.

The mountains sing, to their faraway lovers,

Proclaiming their dallience,

To the ever-so-loving sun.

As dusk sets in, and noon bids a reluctant goodbye,

The fireflies declare their warm presence,

To the shaky, restless grass;

While the Nightingale narrates,

To the baby birds,

A story of yonder deserts, deprived of

All forms of life and joy.

And when they melt down to a drowsy sleep,

And the moon is wholesome with affection,

An ineffable, serene play between the sky and land,

Comes into action in the theatre of stars.

Brooding within such miracles of nature, my friend,

How can one ever feel tired?


Scheme X X A X B X X X X A C B X X X X X X X C X X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 01110101 11110101 01111001111 1010010101 01010010101 1010110001 1011011 10111101 01011110110 01011 10101101 111001100101 010011110 1010101 1010001 10101 01011010011 111101 0111110101 0011101010 10100011010101 101100010011 1001110011011 11110110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 939
Words 205
Sentences 5
Stanzas 24
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 30
Words per stanza (avg) 7
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Written on August 01, 2022

Submitted by shraddhamodak1 on August 05, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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