Analysis of Thee Mine Loving Mother!
Reena Lakhaiyar 1999 (Ranchi)
Thee;
The Lord of mine breath,
Thee;
The savior of mine death,
Glad I am
Glad is mine birth,
Divine and utmost
Thine efficient effort…
Thee;
An unbound perennial river
Bathing mine sins in; as daughter,
Thee;
Mine glisten supernova
The creator that Almighty has discover
Forever;
Immortal thine love
Thee mine loving mother…
Thee;
The ocean of love,
Thy milk of nectar unbound sailing in mine blood,
Thee;
The Grail of mine birth,
Thine lap mine earth,
Thine feet mine floor,
Thine glee mine mirth,
Thine desires mine feathers,
Forever;
Immortal thine love
Thee mine loving mother…
The beats of mine heart conceive
The purity of Bhagwat Geeta perceive,
In voice of thy words, I receive…
The roots of mine gallivant mind beholds
The bliss of Quran Sharif
In thy uncounted waves of affection’s folds…
The emotions of mine soul
Depicts the images painted o’er,
The ecstasy of Holy Bible’s pages
Under the lucent shades of thy caring phases…
Yore;
I gained my sense,
In thy school of admiration,
In thy temple of knowledge,
Obedient was I, the follower of thee
The only disciple,
The palms of mine conscience
Beholds thy bounty of teachings,
Alike;
Mine notions of life art learning
The Guru Granth Sahib’s preaching…
Thee an Oak, me a creeper,
Thine hope mine future,
Immortal thine love
Thee mine loving mother…
To thee;
Infant was I,
Infant will I,
Infant I am
Forever to thee… my mom! ! !
Closed art mine eyes in adore,
Resting with glee my head
On thy shore… on thy shore…
Molded I am in ye,
I the child of thy core…
Thy stretched wings of arms
Mine fortune’s door,
Immortal forever,
Immortal thine love
Thee mine loving mother…
Me the shadow of thine dawn hover,
Me a drop of thine blessing shower,
Might;
In lobbies of mischief
I spoke thee haughty,
Might;
In couch of childhood,
I abhorrence thee naughty,
I thy child poor,
Nevertheless;
Forever, since and yet
I thy dear,
Thy child of care,
Immortal thine love
Thee mine loving mother
Thee mine loving mother…! ! !
Scheme | AbAbcdxxAeeAxeEFEAfxAddgdhEFE iii hxx xejj gxxxaxxxxkk eeFE allcxgxgagxgeFE eeMxaMxaxxxxxFEE |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (36%) |
Metre | 1 01111 1 010111 111 1111 0101 101010 1 101010010 10110110 1 110010 001010101010 010 01011 111010 1 01011 111100110011 1 01111 1111 1111 1111 1010110 010 01011 111010 0111101 010011101 01111101 0111111 011101 0110110101 0010111 010100101 01001101010 100101111010 1 1111 0111010 0110110 010011010011 010010 011110 1110110 01 11011110 011110 111101 11110 01011 111010 11 1011 1011 1011 0101111 1111001 101111 111111 101101 101111 11111 1101 010010 01011 111010 10111110 101111010 1 010110 11110 1 0111 1010110 1111 001 010101 111 1111 01011 111010 111010 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 2,098 |
Words | 435 |
Sentences | 6 |
Stanzas | 8 |
Stanza Lengths | 29, 3, 3, 4, 11, 4, 15, 16 |
Lines Amount | 85 |
Letters per line (avg) | 18 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 193 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 44 |
About this poem
This poem is dedicated to my mother who is just above my god
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Submitted by reenalakhaiyar14142 on August 26, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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