Analysis of Rishte ke kamjor dor

Miss Nikita Wase 2003 (Nagpur)



Kuch to rishta tha tera mera (2)
Bas us Rishte ko ek nam nhi tha
Hamara sath muskurahat pr shuru huva or rulane  pr khatam
Sach bata ky tuje muje rulana jaruri tha, ya mai galat thi jo tere liye roi thi
Tere dil se mere dil tak jo dor thi ky o itne kamjor thi jo tut chuki thi
Mai to use jodne ke koshish kr rahi thi
Pr jodte jodte usmai ek gath aa gai thi
Mai us gath se anjan thi shayad tuje fir pyar karne lagi thi
Jis prem kahani ko mai adhura samaj kr pura karne ke soch rahi thi o to barso  pahale he khatam ho chuki thi
Bas bye for ever bolane ke deri  rai chuki thi....!


Scheme ABCBBBBBBB
Poetic Form Etheree  (20%)
Metre 111111 11111111 1111111111 11111111111111111 111111111111111111 111111111 111111111 1111111111111 111111111011111111111111 111101111011
Characters 581
Words 127
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 44
Words per line (avg) 13
Letters per stanza (avg) 444
Words per stanza (avg) 127
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Written on December 12, 2020

Submitted by nikitawase11 on August 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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