Analysis of lips conversing



the world fades away
as I sit on the table
your eyes catch mine,
and remain focused on each other
lips talk to each other
in sync
slow down, quicken the pace
deep conversations
while his hands make it all over my back
gripping his neck
no space between our chests
conversing lips
lips conversing


Scheme ABCDDEFGHIJKL
Poetic Form
Metre 01101 1111010 1111 001101110 111110 01 111001 1010 1111111011 1011 1101101 0101 1010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 296
Words 56
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 239
Words per stanza (avg) 55

About this poem

Had my first kiss with someone I really like. So I wrote about it.

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Written on August 17, 2022

Submitted by palesamagonare on August 19, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Lesedi Magonare

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