Analysis of Journey of the sailor Moon



Just by the cold Winter
When breeze wail chasing bears out of its den
He set out for his endless journey
Unto the Moonlight sail

By the serene evening
The reins of his boat in his hands
Entwined in each other's arms
And lurking lips

A bye is seen on their gloomy faces
Not knowing their flowers which he waters is a bloomy thorn

He sets out
Leaving all along his hope in his journey of the sailor

From Barcelona to Carribean
He munches on his prayers for lifetime

Then by the spring
When rains drips from wet leaves
Returned he home
To see his peace shackled
The sight for the sore eyes

He left in sadness and grief
His hopes lovelorned

He solace in drinks
His hopes down to the running drawless well of course

And in the columbarium
His memories are worshipped every sane year...


Scheme ABXX CXXX XX DA BE CXXXX XD XX EX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (24%)
Metre 110110 1111011111 111111010 10011 100110 01111011 0101101 0101 0111111010 11011011101011 111 101011101101010 101011 1111111 1101 111111 0111 111110 011011 1101001 111 11001 11110101111 0001 110011010011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 788
Words 155
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 2, 2, 2, 5, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 70
Words per stanza (avg) 16

About this poem

This is a love poem written in memory of a sailor who leaves for a a sojourn and in return... Meet his loving wife cheating

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Written on August 25, 2022

Submitted by tajudeenmuadh on August 25, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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