Analysis of i wish

xilas 2002 (kampala)



I wish I could get to be you
That way it could be okay
okay me to put you before me

I wish we shared the same lifetime
That way i could guarantee
Am with you until

I wish you get to stay you
You now, you then, you forever
That way even when time changes I know you won't

I wish you wish what i wish


Scheme AXB XBX AXX X
Poetic Form Etheree  (40%)
Metre 11111111 111111 11111011 1111011 111101 11101 1111111 11111010 111011101111 1111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 301
Words 70
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 1
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 57
Words per stanza (avg) 17

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Loving someone very very much

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Written on August 24, 2022

Submitted by xilas on August 24, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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