Analysis of Hope



The vehicles run by
People wake up go to work
Vehicles never stops
People never stops
Trains moves  by and it never stops
Birds chirping never stops
Dogs barking never stops
Heart pumping blood in these veins never stops
Breathing never stops
Clock ticking and hands moving, time never stops
Nights turn into days and days turn into nights, they never stops
Intake of food and shitting the waste every morning, this never stops
I guess me hoping for days which are more bearable, this hope never stops
People praying to god, people praising the god and god breaking their beliefs never stops
Me wondering and dreaming and analysing and processing what i have become, this talk never stops
My brain making me mad , weak and do useless crazy things everyday never stops
I guess nothing ever stops
Nothing ever will.
But sometimes when i sit alone at night
And i see the stars and i see bats flying over
And i see drunk people walking by and i see people sleeping
Under the street lights .
For that particular moment, for that particular instance
Everything stops
The moon the stars the vehicles the clouds
And if i am lucky enough
Sometimes this pain in my heart stops.


Scheme ABCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCDEFGHICJKC
Poetic Form
Metre 010011 1011111 100101 10101 11101101 110101 110101 1101011101 10101 11001101101 110110110111101 1110101100101101 111101111110011101 1010111010010110101101 11000100101001110111101 11101110110101101101 1110101 10101 1011110111 0110101111010 0111101010111010 10011 1101001011010010 101 0101010001 01111001 01110111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,175
Words 217
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 27
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 947
Words per stanza (avg) 210

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Written when it was raining and the time was 3:30 am

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Submitted by Ayushpremchandani0 on August 23, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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