Analysis of Freedom?

Aaron Acedo 1960 (calif)



If i were free i would have no pain inside of me
If i were free then i would have a reason to be
If i were free then i wouldn't have to look behind me          And i were free they wouldn't have to lock the doors behind me
And if i were free then i wouldn't have to be afraid of me
But if i was really free then i would have someone beside me
But since i'm not free my heart will be empty for eternity
But to free my mind i would have to die
Because i see no freedom

AARON A  5-10-14


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Poetic Form
Metre 1101111110111 1101111101011 11011110111011010111011101011 0110111101110111 111110111111011 1111111111010100 1111111111 0111110 100
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 484
Words 107
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 8, 1
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 13
Letters per stanza (avg) 181
Words per stanza (avg) 58

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Written on May 10, 2014

Submitted by aaronacedo12 on August 05, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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