Analysis of Ek paid

Bushra 2003 (Delhi)



Ek paid tha mere paas khada hua.
Jiske sae m main pala hua.
Wo paid nhi tha pahad hr musibat se nikaal kerta baher.
Uska saya bhut khaas tha hr mussam mere paas tha.
Uski chaun kya khub thi duniya ki asliyat bhut dur thi.
Meri hr galti pr muskura diya krta tha meri jannt ka darwaza kuch aesa tha.
Wo saya jb chin gya wo paid jb kat gya dhoop bhut chilagti h serdi bhut lgti hai har mussam bhut rulata hai ABBU ka saya bhut yaad ata h .


Scheme AABCCCD
Poetic Form
Metre 11111110 1111110 11111111111 1111111111 11111111111 111111111111111 1111111111111111111111111111101
Characters 436
Words 96
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 7
Lines Amount 7
Letters per line (avg) 48
Words per line (avg) 13
Letters per stanza (avg) 339
Words per stanza (avg) 91

About this poem

I wrote this poem after my father left this poem is reality of my life this is for my father.

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Written on December 01, 2020

Submitted by bushraaliarhama on August 17, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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