Analysis of Dear Dad



*I was just a little kid*...
When you caught my hand in the cookie jar.
I thought you would yell at me...
But, you didn't.

*I was seven*...
When you found me playing with mom's makeup. I thought you would tell her who broke her favourite lipstick...
But, you didn't.

*I was nine*...
When you got me a bicycle and taught me how to ride it.
I thought you would leave me to fall...
But, you didn't.

*I was thirteen*...
When I asked you to come for my dance show.
I thought you would miss the event...
But, you didn't.

*I was sixteen*...
When I begged you not to go for war, dad.
You promised me you'll come back soon....
But, you didn't.

*I was seventeen*...
When I wrote letters to you every day.
I expected you to reply soon....
But, you didn't.

*I'm 25 now, oh dad!
I talk to your grave stone every day.
Hoping you would reply some day...
But, you didn't.


Scheme xxxA xxA xxxA bxxA bcdA bedA ceeA
Poetic Form
Metre 1110101 1111100101 1111111 1110 1110 11111011111111011011 1110 111 111101000111111 11111111 1110 1111 1111111111 11111001 1110 1101 1111111111 11011111 1110 11101 11110111001 101011011 1110 1111 1111111001 10110111 1110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 885
Words 197
Sentences 28
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 86
Words per stanza (avg) 24

About this poem

It's a letter from a daughter to her father who is an army officer.

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Written on October 19, 2021

Submitted by Kaashvisaha28 on August 26, 2022

Modified on April 06, 2023

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