Analysis of DARK CLOUDS
Among the dark clouds
I am just floating around.
Resting for a while But again starting to float
Cause I must not be found.
I have been holding
a layer on layer
Thinking I have to stay stood
To make everything for them fair.
But time to time I feel exhausted
Then try to find the lost self
Then I feel I can't have something
Which I have never felt.
Walking through it is a tough part
So thinking about telling someone seems good
But again the evil side holds me back
And here I am all alone left stood.
Why can't they feel the pain
I have been being under
Why they seem to judge everything from outside
Is it the present of the uneven moments
I have gone through in making my weak self hide.
still there is something that keeps me floating
I wish someday I will start flying
And that something will be clear
And its ray will make me see the white clouds appearing:)
Scheme | ABCBDEFGHIDJKFLFMENONDDPD |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 01011 1111001 101011011011 111111 11110 010110 1011111 1110111 111111010 1111011 11111110 111101 10111011 1100110111 1010101111 011110111 111101 1111010 1111110111 110101001010 11110101111 1111011110 11111110 0110111 0111111011010 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 870 |
Words | 179 |
Sentences | 7 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 25 |
Lines Amount | 25 |
Letters per line (avg) | 28 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 688 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 169 |
About this poem
This poem is very close to my heart.I can't express my emotions through verbal words so writing it is like a magical thing for me.I wrote it when I was just trapped inside myself and writing it made my heart lighter.I hope whoever reading it finds some comfort in it and knows that they are not the only ones fighting with something dark and finds it helpful.
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Written on June 14, 2022
Submitted by mmanasranjan322 on August 26, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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