Analysis of INTIMACY IS HOME



INTIMACY IS HOME      BY Mimi.D.
So you hold me like I'm meant to live in your arms
And everytime i tell you that i'm not used to this cage
You let me in like it's my home
Or should I say my new home
The legs, the deep low sounds, the sweat
The bruises, the recklessness.....
My pelvic loves it all
Every sensation is in tune with my body
Every deep drill rests streets ahead in my soul
Like i need no more responsibilities to fool around with life

You don't know but this new me finds solace in your groans
I love every damn inch of whatever pinch
I just started living like my life depends on a kiss
And then this kiss is the only key to my soul

Life tends to owe us so much
Then we dim the real essence of joy
Normalizing God's endowment as a gamble
Entertained anyhowly with anyone
But this new me knows that every game has a coach
And this is not it
You just gave me a home!

So would you let me own this home?


Scheme AXXBBAXXACX XXXC XXXXXAB B
Poetic Form
Metre 10001111 111111111011 0101111111111 11101111 1111111 01011101 0100100 110111 1000101011110 100111101011 1111100100110111 1111111110011 11100111101 11101011101101 011110101111 1111111 111011011 10010101010 011110 1111111001101 01111 111101 11111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 919
Words 195
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 11, 4, 7, 1
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 177
Words per stanza (avg) 48

About this poem

A poem opposing the new normalities society has accepted and approved in relationships just to down play love

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Written on January 17, 2022

Submitted by on September 04, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Mimi.D.

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