Analysis of Without you



I have made
this vow
in unborn
silence whether
the sky has lost
her tongues
and the earth
her sights whether
the sun has been
blinded by her
minions
and the stars have
lost their smiles
i stand by this vow
in fertilized quiet
i will
don't fret
without you
i will go
no! don't despair
i will go
nowhere
without you

© Oluwatobi Moremi


Scheme xaxbxxxbxbxxxaxxxCDeDeC x
Poetic Form
Metre 111 11 011 1010 0111 01 001 0110 0111 1010 10 0011 111 11111 01010 11 11 011 111 1101 111 1 011 11
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 341
Words 73
Sentences 2
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 23, 1
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 11
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 132
Words per stanza (avg) 33
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