Analysis of Stumblings



falling from grace,
temptations that lasts.
hindrance that becomes stumblings,
a light winnowing,
always fighting a good fight,
a vision out of sight.
always hoping for the better,
straying from the righteous path and things.
a cycle of endless negative behavior and habits,
a faith no better than death itself.
always respect for the lifestyle;
far away from the ashes and dusts of a tomb yet unforeseen in the future,
in spite of the stryfe,
still always room for corrections,
knowing your limits,
the difference between being different and treating others with respect and decency.
a life-changing actions to be taken.
always standing up for what you believe in,
a step to the most upright and righteous direction,
very crucial to your being righteous,
milestone of sleepless days and nights before we can rest assure!!!


Scheme ABACDDEFGHIEHJGKLMLNO
Poetic Form
Metre 1011 01011 101011 0110 110011 010111 1101010 101010101 010110100010010 011101101 101101 1011010011011010010 01101 1111010 10110 01000110100010101010100 0110101110 1101111010 0110101010010 1010111010 11101010111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 823
Words 155
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 665
Words per stanza (avg) 135

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true to life experience with emotional attachments and meaningful intent that comes from the inner and most personal being of a person such as I!!!

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Written on August 23, 2022

Submitted by marvellion79 on August 23, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Donn M. Ronquillo

born in Phillippines in a simple town of Paranaque with simple and basic need nothing fancy raised right out of the canals of Pasay City with heritage of unknown origins with da name originally from Venice,Italy with an upbringing of unlimited potential of values, characters,morales,traditions and upstanding habits and hobbies!!! more…

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