Analysis of God for a day

Sherry Keown 1960 (Detroit)



Our kids are dying for the clothes that they wear, such trivial things at best. Jackets and sneakers have suddenly become more important than life I guess.
And what about the 10 year old, already selling cocaine on the streets, with mom and grandma's blessing to approach everyone they meet.
I don't know anymore, I'm confused and I'm scared, how has mankind gone so far astray?
Yet all of the answers could suddenly be mine,
If I could be God for a day ..


Scheme ABCDC
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 10111010111111001111001011000110101111 010101101010011011101101011011 11101101011111111101 111010110011 11111101
Characters 456
Words 87
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 71
Words per line (avg) 17
Letters per stanza (avg) 357
Words per stanza (avg) 84
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Written on August 18, 2022

Submitted by shermae07 on August 18, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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