Analysis of Obsidian Forest

R1ver 2022 (Coimbatore)



The obsidian forest remains still.
A wind sways the forest, whoosh! Rustle…
Back to being silent again.


Scheme ABC
Poetic Form Tercet 
Metre 0010010011 011010110 11101001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 105
Words 18
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 3
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 82
Words per stanza (avg) 17

About this poem

This is my first ever haiku. Please feel free to comment on it

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Written on August 16, 2022

Submitted by rabia on August 17, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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