Analysis of The hidden me!
I have a daily fight with my own thoughts,
Seems diving into pain without stop.
I wanna end all this,
I'd rather rest in peace
than living in this daily chaos.
Dealing with self-hatred is the worst,
wanna make friends but can't trust.
I stay quiet,
because I have to answer my past.
Don't laugh at anything,
thinking it's a piece of art.
Stuck in my own ideals and beliefs
looking for solution,
but I'm left isolated on an island of grief.
I don't want to write sad poems anymore,
but failure in the journey of searching myself,
tells the inner me once more.
I make 100 promises,
which gives me nothing more than bruises.
I believe, each day is a new life,
that too gets wasted from my side.
I think,I overthink
and this is how, it gives me a deeper lookout of the things,
but, I forget not to implement this on my life,
cause I know everything is momentary in life.
Smiling through the pain is a part of my daily routine,
cause I don't want to get judged by little things.
Everyday,
I think, I solved the puzzled side of me.
But again, at the end of the day,
I feel, I'm lost in searching me.
-- Ayushi Rani
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1101011111 110011011 110111 110101 110011010 101110101 1011111 1110 011111011 11110 1010111 101101001 101010 111100111011 1111111001 11000101101 1010111 11100 111101110 101111011 11110111 111 01111110101101 1101111001111 11110110001 10101101111001 11111111101 101 1111010111 101101101 11110101 110 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,157 |
Words | 242 |
Sentences | 14 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 32 |
Lines Amount | 32 |
Letters per line (avg) | 27 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 850 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 213 |
About this poem
This poem is about that hidden self of me which other can't see, but deep inside in the core of my heart it exists. This hidden me has taken birth because of all those ups and downs I went through,which were unexpected and painful. And in all this chaos it feels if I am lost in searching my real self.
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Written on June 16, 2022
Submitted by ayushirani1985 on July 29, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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